Too Little, Too Late (For @trifectawriting)

For this weekend’s Trifextra challenge, we were asked to write a story about the picture provided below in either 33 or 333 words. Being the lazy sloth that I am, I chose the former … “And that has made all the difference.”

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Too Little, Too Late

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PLEASE, kid. Don’t toss me over. That stupid cow will chew me to bits. I SWEAR I’ll wear a dress at EVERY tea party from now on. … Yes, of course. AND a hat.”

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29 responses to “Too Little, Too Late (For @trifectawriting)

  1. LOL! Great take! I went with 33 words too… :)

  2. Is that your cow Michelle?

  3. When I read the last line I busted out laughing. Great take!

  4. Well. I’ll THINK about it. You may have to sit next to mister fuzzy buns and his gas problem, too.

  5. The idea in itself is so brilliant and its execution even more.

  6. I love the POV of the stuffed animal. Hilarious :)

  7. By the way, I don’t know if it’s just me, but the link on the Trifecta page wouldn’t bring up your site.

  8. I loved this. Like someone said, a cute variation using the bear’s POV. Great job!

  9. Wonderful. Straight and to the heart.

  10. awriterweavesatale

    Lol. That’s cute.

  11. Ha! What a fun, funny take on the photo! :) Love it.

  12. Loved this one – Who would’ve thought to use the POV of the bear? Great job.

  13. Thank you so much for linking up to Trifextra this weekend. The challenge this weekend will be judged by the community. So please come back to the Trifecta home page and click the stars next to the three posts you most enjoyed. You only have until Monday at 8 am EST, so hurry!

  14. Clever from Bearie’s perspective.

  15. I’m hearing a think Bronx accent from the bear, I think. :) Very amusing!

  16. that’s great! i can totally see that bear making the plea!
    love it.

  17. Awesome! Here’s to all those tea party dresses…!

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